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 MY OC : Crystal Heartshine *in progress*

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AdorableFluttershy123



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PostSubject: MY OC : Crystal Heartshine *in progress*   Sun Apr 28, 2013 6:26 am

Crystal Heartshine

Gender: Female

Species: Unicorn

Mane: Back/sholder leangth pinkish purple with a lighter pink streak

Tail: Short (color matches hair)

Eyes: Big blue-green eyes

Body: Hot pink/purple

Cutie Mark: A crystal heart with 3 sparkles. It represents how she is a fragile girl who can easly be shatered. Her special talent is that she can make a bright light with her horn to light up dark places. This was developed due to a fear of the dark.

Age (Baby,adult): Just a Filly

Personality: She is a very shy girl until she gets to know sombody. However, once she trusts you she is a very loyal friend. She grew up with very strict parents and has a strong sence of good and bad tending to stick with the rules even when others don't. This has exposed many "friends" who wanted her to break them when she chose not to.

Likes: Cake, Small animals, and Magic tricks.

Dislikes: Dark places, Big animals, and Partys.

History: Crystal has always been shy and is a bit of an outcast at school. She wants to grow up to bake cakes and pies but isn't very good at it so she gets discuraged when sombody doesn't like her treats. Although she is shy she likes to pretend to act in plays when by herself. She grew up in Manehattan with her mom and was always afraid of something bad around every corner. She moved to Ponyville not long ago and doesn't know many people yet tending to stay to herself.

Example RP segment: Situation 3. Crystal heads inside soaking wet from the rain. She slowly looks around trying to find a familiar face. When she can't find anyone she sits in a booth. A waiter asks if she needs anything but being just a kid she has no money. "Um... I don't... have any money...". With this the waiter leaves and returns with a small milkshake stating its on the house. When she asks him why he tells her "You looked lonley." walking away with a smile.

"Acceptance"


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PostSubject: Re: MY OC : Crystal Heartshine *in progress*   Sun Apr 28, 2013 6:27 am

It wont let me post the picture but its the same as my profile pic
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PostSubject: Re: MY OC : Crystal Heartshine *in progress*   Sun Apr 28, 2013 6:43 am

Hello AdorableFluttershy123, Welcome to the forum!

I like your OC so far!

only things I would like to see is the personality and history expanded on. Where was Crystal Heartshine born? where is she now?

Not much is needed. Like I said, I like your OC so far.

Thank you ^.^

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PostSubject: Re: MY OC : Crystal Heartshine *in progress*   Sun Apr 28, 2013 7:07 am

Changes have been made.

Approved!

Have Fun! ^.^

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