flame disk

flame disk
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Gender: male
Species: unicorn
Mane: red, with yellow stripes at times
Tail: same as mane
Eyes: blue, but mainly wears red shades
Body: white
Cutie Mark: DJ table
Age (Baby,adult): adult
Personality: very social,likes to talk with others. however, when he's meeting new people, he is very shy. he likes to keep to himself about his past.
Likes: music, helping others, walking around town, writing new songs. he also likes to help at the library and the apple farm when he can.
Dislikes: people who brag, critics, being tired during his job, rap music
History: he's a new DJ who just moved in, and he is always looking for a time to work on new music. HE first started DJing as a filly, and was often bullied about it. thus, he doesn't like to talk about his past. THis also makes him protective of fillies, even if he just met them.He was the first in his class to get his cutie mark. he originally lived in manehatten, but moved from there because he didnt fit in because of his music style. he went to apploosa, but the same thing happened there. he just got off of the train to his new home.

Example RP segment: Sample 5:

Flame disk walked up to the thug. "Just came to help out this kid. Now leave him alone before i make you." The thug stared at flame for a minute, then went back to bullying the filly. flame, now ticked off, used his foreleg to kick the bully in the face. the bully looked at flame, then at the filly. he ran off, leaving flame with the filly. flame looked at the filly, then helped him up. "you okay,little buddy?" he asked. the filly nodded and ran off. Flame smiled and watched the filly go.

[acceptance]
PS: i have not RPed for a while, and if people have any ides of where i should have this character,feel free to tell me through a PM.
also. image link is this if i doesnt work: file:///Users/mason/Desktop/Nick's%20Games/Flame%20Disk.png

Hello Fang. Welcome to the forum!

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Please expand upon his personality, likes, dislikes, and history. Remember that a well-developed character application will contribute to the success of the OC around the forum.

Please revise the RP segment. It appears to be incomplete.

Thanks!

Approved.