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Thunder Dash



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PostSubject: Choco Delight   Sun Nov 10, 2013 10:41 pm

Choco Delight

Gender: Female
Species: Unicorn
Mane: Dual-colored (light and dark maroon)
Tail: Dual-colored (same as mane)
Eyes: Maroon
Body: Chubby and slightly larger then the average pony size
Cutie Mark: Two chocolate bars in the shape of an X surrounded by a circle of pink hearts. She got it when she discovered her talent in making chocolate and making ponies happy. (Will add to picture soon)
Age (Baby,adult): 15
Personality: She's very giggly. Just about any joke can set off into a laughing fit. She's very kind and very sociable. However, she struggles when things get serious. She may sometimes think it's a big joke, but she must be told in a way, that wouldn't make her upset because she's also very sensitive to what ponies say about her.
Likes: Chocolate, sweets, jokes, laughter, magic
Dislikes: Bullying, Getting picked on, being neglected,
History: Born in Ponyville, Choco Delights was always attracted to candy and sweets, especially chocolate. As a filly, she would sometimes sneak and steal chocolate bars from the local chocolate shop. She was only caught twice but got away with it. When enrolled in school, she was teased and poked at because of her chubbiness. Because of this, she became upset. She learned later that everypony looks at her differently, which took a long time for her to understand. Also, the fact that she was the only blank flank in her class also contributed to the teasing and belittling.

But, a day came when that same chocolate shop, the one that Choco Delight used to steal from when she was a foal, was almost bankrupt. The owner, who was a blank flank, just couldn't make chocolate the right way. Choco Delights decided to help him and because of her giggly and bubbly personality, the magic inside her started to build. All of that cheerfulness she carried around in her, created a new talent in her. On that day, she made her very first chocolate bar. She gave it to the old owner to taste it and he said it was the best chocolate he'd ever eaten. Choco Delight had the biggest smile on her face, which was when she earned her cutie mark.

Example RP segment:

Choco Delight was happily skipping along the streets of Ponyville, when all of a sudden, heard some crying from somewhere. "I wonder who could that be?" Choco Delights asked. She then turned a corner to find a crying little foal. "W-What's wrong?" She asked. The little foal begged for it's mom as it continued to cry. "Don't worry little foal, Choco Delight will make it all better!" Choco said as she made a tootsie-pop appear. The little foal smiled a little as it took the Lollipop, yet tears were still running down its eyes. Choco Delight continued to skip along the streets of Ponyville, asking who the foal belonged to. Finally, Choco Delight found a mare who was looking all over for a lost foal. Choco Delight walked up to her. "Excuse ma'am, are you looking for somepony?" She asked. The little foal looked over Choco's head. The mother looked up. "Is-is that my foal?" She asked. "I don't know. I found it somewhere in a dark place between two buildings." Choco explained. The little foal then got off Choco's back. "Mommy!" It chirped in delight. "Oh, it is my little foal! Thank you so much!" The mother exclaimed with joy. A big smile formed on Choco's face as the little foal hugged its mother and they were reunited once again. Choco began to giggle at this.

I have read the rules. Acceptance


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PostSubject: Re: Choco Delight   Mon Nov 11, 2013 6:27 am

Looks good Thunder Dash.

Just remember to use spacing and paragraphs in your RP segments to avoid walls of text, particularly for speech.

Also, could you just add that little word at the bottom for the rules. Protocol and all that.

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