My Little Pony:Friendship is Magic OC RP
Welcome to the forum! Here we aim to have fun role playing your own OC ponies and chat with your fellow bronies. Please say hi to us in the forum chatroom at the bottom of the home page and look at the rules to help get you started.
My Little Pony:Friendship is Magic OC RP
Welcome to the forum! Here we aim to have fun role playing your own OC ponies and chat with your fellow bronies. Please say hi to us in the forum chatroom at the bottom of the home page and look at the rules to help get you started.
My Little Pony:Friendship is Magic OC RP
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My Little Pony:Friendship is Magic OC RP

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Wish Dancer

Wish Dancer


Posts : 20
Join date : 2012-08-14
Age : 23

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Fireseeker

Fireseeker


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Join date : 2012-07-28
Location : United Kingdom

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PostSubject: Re: --Deleted--   --Deleted-- I_icon_minitimeSat Mar 02, 2013 12:25 pm

Welcome to the site :)

Your character is looking good, but a little bare. Try to flesh out the personality instead of listing words, and expand on her history.

A little more detail and your character will be ready for approval.
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Wish Dancer

Wish Dancer


Posts : 20
Join date : 2012-08-14
Age : 23

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Fireseeker

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Location : United Kingdom

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PostSubject: Re: --Deleted--   --Deleted-- I_icon_minitimeSat Mar 02, 2013 4:36 pm

Eeyup.

Your character has been approved.
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