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Join date : 2012-04-17
|Subject: ClockWork Sat Apr 21, 2012 2:21 am|| |
Species: Earth pony
Mane: Bronze/ Brown, Grey long and messy, covering half her face.
Tail:Bronze/brown, Grey. long and purposly messy
Eyes: Steel Grey
Body: Redish, Gery, a dark blue spot on her flank.
Cutie Mark: three Brinze Gears in a Z pattern
Personality: Know it all and fun loving, hates bullies and prejudice, thinks if you can't do it normally, use an invention.
Likes: inventing, being with friends, exploring, inventors.
Dislikes: prejudice, her family, Canterlot, failed inventions, rust.
History: Clock works family was seen as the highest and purest (and most up tight) family in canterlot. there blood is pure unicorn, each trained in a feild of magic, but genetics sometimes play a cruel hand to those you see them higher than life. Clock work was a normal pony, no horn, not even wings. her family, who saw pegasei as lower beings and Ponies as Dirt, shunned her from birth, only the maid bother to take care of her. she was smarter than her brothers and sisters, but was treated like a dunce. one day she sat in her room and listen to the ticking of her clock. tick. . . tick. . . tick. . . she remembered, her clock, she made that a year ago, she MADE it with her bare hooves. she smiled and came up with an Idea to bring some joy in her life and began to take apart the clock and some of her few toys and rebuilt them into a clockwork scooter. she wound it up and took it outside for a spin. it didn't fall apart, in fact, it ran just like she thought. she rode it for a good hour (that's when it finally wond down by then). she took her invention home, proud of her creation, only to be stopped by her family who took her invention and scould her as she gained her mark from her invention. that night, she took her tinker tools, stole back her scooter, and rode it to Ponyville. once there she lived like a hobo, making small profit from the tinker toys she made, it wasnt untill she was a young adult that people started to reconize her inventions. she made enought profit to set up a real shop and a home. as of today, she is enjoying herself,trying to make some friends.
Posts : 1584
Join date : 2011-11-21
Location : A little pocket universe after almost destroying the old one.
|Subject: Re: ClockWork Sat Apr 21, 2012 4:14 am|| |
Hey. Focus on one pony and develop his character first, kay?
_________________The maiden, the mother, and the other one.
If Paradise Blossom speaks in red, she is speaking Neighponese.I do my best now and am preparing. Please wait warmly until it is finished.
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Join date : 2011-11-21