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Smarticus



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PostSubject: Astutos Ingenio    Fri Oct 23, 2015 11:34 pm

Name: Astutos Ingenio

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Gender:Male


Species:Unicorn


Mane: His mane is black with pale purple highlights that comes down to his shoulder.


Tail: Long enough to almost drag the ground and it matched his mane.


Eyes: He's almost blind so his eyes are grey, but he has glasses that give him full 20/20 vision.


Body: Rather thin and around the average height of a mare, and his fur is the same pale purple  as his mane.


Cutie Mark: An open text book with a chemistry experiment on the left page, and a math equation on the right page.


Age (Baby,adult): Teenaged, 16 to be exact


Personality: He's rather quiet and doesn't really show much emotion. He prefers to be alone or in the company of his owl, Noctua. He also likes to read, learn, and invent. He doesn't really date often but has been in love before. When confronted with things he doesn't like,say for instance bullies , he usually tried to take the high road. Wether it is simply ignoring loud noises, or out smarting bullies. He also then events his angry put his frustations towards one of his inventions, or reading books.

Likes: Books, Learning, Studying, Inventing, School, Silence, his owl Noctua, Nature, making people happy.


Dislikes: Sports, Jocks, Loud noises, Bullies, Orphanages, making other sad.


History: Astutos was born in the dead of winter, in the poor part of Canterlot. Which wouldn't be so bad if he wasn't immediatly taken to the city orphanage.  A disgusting and rather vile place that was stuff full of wanted colt and fillies. Every day since Astutos arrived, and for as long as he could remember, he hated that place. Even so, Astutos always looked to better himself. Even when he was told at age three he was almost blind and would have to wear glasses for the rest of his life, some how through it all he looked toward the future.
        As a testiment to this, Astutos applied to school a year early at the age of four. After some testing, and the approval of the teacher he was accepted. He was happy for once, and felt fulfilled at with what he was doing. However, he learned at a much more accelerated rate than other students, and was able to skip several grades. So many so he graduated highschool by age twelve.
         Astutos, ready to continue his education, applied to Canterlot University the same year. This required him to move out of the orphanage, and into a dorm on campus. Astutos did really mind however, as he did hate the orphanage with all his heart. He packed up his books and bits he'd save by working odds and ends  jobs around Canterlot and set of to collage. As he had a full scolarship, however, the bits were more for small wants and needs rather than rent.
       It was around two years later though, that he began to feel lonely. So on his 15th birthday he bought himself a pet owl which he named Noctua. He found new companionship with Noctua, and for once he had a friend he trusted. Life stated the same until he graduated from the university at the age of sixteen. He graduated with masters degrees in Theoretical Math, and Scientific Magic feilds. He graduated validictorian, and as he gave his speech, his cutie mark appeared. It displayed his love for learning and inventing new things.
         After he graduated from the university, Astutos applied for a professorship at Canterlot University. Seeing as they needed a new Scientific Magic teacher, they seriously gave him a professor's job. This gave him the ability to move into his own apartment by age 18. He now lives happily with Noctua in said apartment, and looks forever forward to the future.


Example RP segment: This week had just gone down the toilet for Astutos. He had a million finals to grade, and he'd lost his best pair of glasses. But to top it all off, Astutos had been receiving love letters in his teacher mail box every day for the past week.
         Now to any other teacher it would seem innocent and rather sweet, but to him it was rather unwanted and pointless. For one he was younger than anyone on campus by at least two years. This rule, however, only applies if it's a student. Oh how he'd dread if it was another professor, who at this point were upwards of ten to twenty years older than him.
         As luck would have it though he got another letter from his new admirer, which was how he viewed this pony. He sighed, opened the letter and read it's contents. He sighed, letting the paper fall to his desk as he lay back in his chair.
        "This show of affection, couldn't have come at a worse point in time."
         As he said this, one of his female students, Sunny Beam, happened to walk into the room.
         "Um, Professor Ingenio, may I talk to you?" She asked walking up to his desk, wanting for a response . He looked up at her and adjusted his glasses.
         " Yes Sunny, but make this quick I have finals to grade." He sat up straight, while Sunny nervously tried to think of a way to word her feelings.
          "Well sir, I just thought I should tell you that the love letters you've been getting are from me. See i just really think your cute, and just love how smart and confident you are and..." Just before she could continue, Astutos cut her off.
          " Sunny I'm honored that you think of me this way, but I'm not one to date. And on top of that, your at least two years older than I am." He explained, then watched the look of sadness spread across her face. Being as soft hearted as he was, Astutos couldn't stand to make one of his students sad.
         He then quickly added,"But I supposed we could get some tea sometime. Maybe see where that takes us."
         As soon as he said this, Sunny's face list up as she blurted out a place and time before kissing him on the cheek and leaving to tell her friends the news. Caught a little off guard by the kiss, Astutos sat back down in his seat before turning back to grading papers with the brightest red face he'd ever had, before quietly uttering,"What have I gotten myself into."
         

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PostSubject: Re: Astutos Ingenio    Sat Oct 24, 2015 4:40 am

YIIII WELCOME WELCOME WELCOME TO THE FORUM :D :D I'M SO GLAD YOU'RE HERE!!! I HOPE YOU JOIN OUR CHAT BOX AT THE BOTTOM OF THE HOME PAGE OR RIGHT HAND BOTTOM OF YOUR SCREEN! WE WOULD LOVE TO GET TO KNOW YOU! I'M YOUR FRIENDLY NEIGHBORHOOD ADMIN, DOODLE BUG AND I'LL BE LOOKING OVER YOUR APP!

Now, down to business!
Just a warning that an OC like this can get very, very op depending on how you use him. Maybe up his age a bit to 18-20ish to the graduation/enrolling as a professor so it doesn't seem like a teen is teaching the class! He seems to give an air that he is smarter than, or a heck of a lot like Twilight! ^^

I see that in the history you used Excellerated instead of Accelerated. Common mistake that I make very often! XD

The personality needs to be a bit longer as well! You could say how he acts when faced with his likes and dislikes as well as why his real parents instantly Orphaned him.
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PostSubject: Re: Astutos Ingenio    Sat Oct 24, 2015 10:25 am

Alrighty I've made said adjustments, if more is needed just ask.
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PostSubject: Re: Astutos Ingenio    Sat Oct 24, 2015 6:51 pm

It is approved, but be careful! This could very easily cross the Op line.
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