(CUT!!!)Rose Storm

Subject: (CUT!!!)Rose Storm Sun Jun 21, 2015 2:16 pm

~~Rose Storm~~
Gender: Mare
Species: Pegasus

Mane: Navy Blue; Held back with a white hairband; short
Tail: Navy Blue; folds over it's self; wavy, and kinda curly; kinda long
Eyes: Violet

Body: Well built; Rosa coat(and before you ask, Rosa and Pink are somewhat different color, basically two different pinks)
Cutie Mark: A Rose, losing a petal

Age: 20

Personality: Somewhat lazy; owns a Canterlot flower shop; Owns a back and white kitten named Mittens; Can be a perfectionist at times; very anti-social, and owns the Shop just so she can have money; short tempered fuse; if met with dislikes, can just mentally break for a while; mostly trys to avoid ponies, but will fight if a bully is in her view.

Likes: Laying on clouds; petting Mittens; tending to flowers
Dislikes: Ponies(except her sisters); being stressed; super large orders; bullies

History: The middle of three Pegasi sisters, she always wanted to be alone, or only with her sisters. Her father was actually different from Starflower's, and never called her stepfather "father" or "dad". She treated him with respect, as she did all adults and elders, but always steered clear of him. She always lounged on clouds during her free time, and tended to the flowers in her mother's shop in Manehatten. At the age of 19, she was able to convince her mother to let her move to Canterlot for more money. At Canterlot, after settling down, she saw an abandoned kitten who looked like she was wearing a tux. She took the kitten home for the night, and called it Mittens because of the paws
After the night was over she took the kitten to the vet. Mittens was declared healthy, and with no owner. Rose took the kitten in.

She got her Cutie Mark very late actually. At the age of 15(the normal age for receiving a Cutie Mark is round the age of 10), she helped her school become more Eco-friendly. For planting a small rose bush in the school green-house, she got her Cutie Mark. She feels as though it represents the fragility of the mind, and how it's similar to a flower's stem and petals.

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Example RP segment:

Rose trotted 'round Manehatten. When she turned the bend and saw a colt, she wondered who he was hovering over. As she moved closer she saw the colt was bullying a young mare.

"What are you looking at, punk!?" the colt said as he caught her glance. She temper snapped.

"Leave the kid alone!" she yelled at him. She hated any kind of bully, but she wasn't a pushover. "Or are you such a jerk, that you have no other choice but to bully her?" she told the kid.

The colt charged and she punched him. As a fight started she told the filly: "Run! Go home!" And the filly did.
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By sundown, she had bruises all over. But she had stopped the bully, and got him in trouble. She was happy that the girl she helped was okay.

Posts : 1450 Join date : 2012-11-06

This looks great so far! Remind me when it's done and I'll look over it ^_^

Subject: Re: (CUT!!!)Rose Storm Wed Jun 24, 2015 4:39 pm

KK ^^

Subject: Re: (CUT!!!)Rose Storm Sun Jun 28, 2015 10:14 pm

It's finished

Posts : 1450 Join date : 2012-11-06

Awesome, but the personality needs to be a bit longer! Maybe say how she feels if confronted by her likes or dislikes? (Idk, this is just an idea XD but the personality does need to be a bit bigger. Possibly 4-5 lines of text.

Subject: Re: (CUT!!!)Rose Storm Mon Jun 29, 2015 9:00 pm

This better?

Posts : 1450 Join date : 2012-11-06

Approved!