My Little Pony:Friendship is Magic OC RP
Welcome to the forum! Here we aim to have fun role playing your own OC ponies and chat with your fellow bronies. Please say hi to us in the forum chatroom at the bottom of the home page and look at the rules to help get you started.

My Little Pony:Friendship is Magic OC RP

Welcome to Equestria everypony! Come and Roleplay with your MLP OC in Ponyville and many other places!
 
HomeCalendarFAQSearchMemberlistUsergroupsRegisterLog in

Share | 
 

 Rai

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
AuthorMessage
Ivory



Posts : 2
Join date : 2012-02-11
Age : 21
Location : Sleeping

PostSubject: Rai   Sat Feb 11, 2012 2:52 am

Rai

Gender: Female.
Species: Pegasus.
Mane: Golden yellow.
Tail: Golden yellow. (Same as mane.)
Eyes: Light blue.
Body: Dark grey almost black. It is also skinny with a bit of muscles.
Cutie Mark: Lightening. Same color as eyes. (Also shown in reference.)
Age (Baby,adult): Young adult / teenager.
Personality:
Rai tries to stay modest, but like everypony she has her moments. She is very happy, energetic, loves to be outside, & having fun. She is good at hiding her emotions, but when she is alone she spends time thinking about the world around her & her feelings. She always tries her best not to let others get to her & her insecure feelings, as well, just as anypony. She loves being right & tries her hardest to not pick fights over little things, especially when she knows she is. She'll accept almost any challenges, as long as it doesn't hurt her friends or her loved ones. She gets angry some what easily, it depends on the matter. She also has trouble staying mad at people, unless the situation is horrible. She will stand up for friends & will stay loyal to them, no matter what. She loves blizzards, storms, animals, sleeping, & her friends & family. She hates being told what to do, obsessively & getting up early.
History: Rai was born & raise in the cities of Cloudsdale. She lived an average marehood. She was raised with just a mother. Her mom never told her why her father left her, directly. Whenever her mom spoke of him, it was usually profanity. Rai was very eager to move out & when she was able to live on her own, she took advantage of it. She moved to Ponyville for a change of scene. (I'll add more if I have to. I have a bad writer's block. ;u; )


Last edited by Rai* on Sun Feb 12, 2012 1:34 am; edited 2 times in total
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://kayylah.deviantart.com
dontpressenter
Admin


Posts : 1533
Join date : 2011-11-21
Location : A little pocket universe after almost destroying the old one.

PostSubject: Re: Rai   Sat Feb 11, 2012 3:03 am

Well, so far it's cool, but do you mind adding a history? It doesn't have to be the next war and peace, just an outline of where your pony comes from how she grew up, etc.

Oh, and I highly recommend joining the chatbox at the bottom of the main page.

_________________
The maiden, the mother, and the other one.

Spoiler:
 


If Paradise Blossom speaks in red, she is speaking Neighponese.

I do my best now and am preparing. Please wait warmly until it is finished.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Ivory



Posts : 2
Join date : 2012-02-11
Age : 21
Location : Sleeping

PostSubject: Re: Rai   Sat Feb 11, 2012 8:55 pm

Updated. ^^


EDIT: I also fixed some grammar mistakes. Hope you don't mind. ouo
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://kayylah.deviantart.com
dontpressenter
Admin


Posts : 1533
Join date : 2011-11-21
Location : A little pocket universe after almost destroying the old one.

PostSubject: Re: Rai   Sun Feb 12, 2012 7:41 pm

Okay, then that's good for a start. You can flesh out details in RP.

Welcome to the forum.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: Rai   Today at 7:47 am

Back to top Go down
 
Rai
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 1 of 1

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
My Little Pony:Friendship is Magic OC RP :: Creations :: Submitted Creations :: Pegasi-
Jump to: