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Mesiagamer



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PostSubject: Sweet_Tooth   Tue May 12, 2015 1:40 am

Sweet Tooth



Gender:Male

Species: Earth Pony

Mane: light brown, short cut

Tail:Light brown unkempt  

Eyes: Green

Body: larger than most stallions but smaller than big Mac. Green coat color

Cutie Mark: two sugar canes

Age (Baby,adult): Adult

Personality: A pony with kind heart pony that's willing to try and be civil with everyone he meets. When he's working will focus on his work weather at his stand or doing his farming. His upbringing has caused him to adopted some codes of noble culture like chivalry and When he faces somepony he really hates he uses become's completely cold hearted against them till they find a way to make it up to him.

Likes: Farming sugar cane, Making sugar products, gathering herbs from everfree forest.

Dislikes: Ponies trying to lie to him, ponies he doesn't know or knows very little trying to flirt with him, His Manehatten ascent popping up when he talks

History:(pre-ponyville)A sugarcane farmer that works on the border of ponyville out by the wilds. He's a shy but kind stallion that hopes to supply's sugar to ponies in the city. Being from Manehattan he was raised by a Midsocity family with a business that works to help other business to get there feet on the ground or get back on there feet or if they have to make sure there clients don't lose any bits or as few bits as possible. His family was very loving with him and he loved his family but do to the business he had to learn and act as a high society pony more often that not wherever he went and he hated that life style of always looking prim and proper to others and mad him desire to look elsewhere for a better life style.

His first understanding of there being a different life was when he read about the life of a farmer in several different books. During this he had a small roof top garden in his Manehatten home his biggest moment was during a school project were he brought in some of his plants and showed how sugar was made and its processes. This eventually turned in to a discussion about farming and herbalism and during this decision he found himself deigning on what he wanted to do and got his cutie mark by the end of that talk. Eventually when he was older he moved away with nothing but some bits start him of, a sugar cane plant and never looked back and a whole cart load of books mostly about farming and other plant based books with a few fiction books here and there.

He Arrived and settled in ponyville just after Discord tried to take over. He still working on making his farm known so he can keep it going even if its just one town.

Example RP segment: Sweet tooth was surprised by the mare he knew nothing about suddenly saying that she loves him. In his head he was annoyed by this but didn't want to be to cruel. "I'm sorry but I'm afraid that ." he saw the mare was hurt looking down sadly. He took a deep breath and continued to talk. "Look I'm sorry you wasted your time on me I admit your very Pretty but i know nothing about you and I'm not looking for a mare friend." He looks away himself. "If we can be friends that would be great but if not then I understand and I'll just leave." He looks at the mare waiting for her response.  

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PostSubject: Re: Sweet_Tooth   Tue May 12, 2015 10:20 pm

Hiya and welcome!!! Your picture doesn't work for me and the personality doesn't seem quite finished. It seems to be stuck on the word 'or'. Can you please lengthen it to maybe five lines of text? :D The history also needs how he got his cutiemark, what his family life was like, did he have an idol?
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PostSubject: Re: Sweet_Tooth   Tue May 12, 2015 11:16 pm

There we go I hope that works out better and sorry I can't make the image work for some reason.
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PostSubject: Re: Sweet_Tooth   Wed May 13, 2015 12:28 am

Oh, sorry to mention this so late but could you please space out the likes, dislikes, history, etc away from each other as well as split paragraphs? It's kind of hard to read ^^'

On your toolbar, you'll notice an icon that looks like this: It'll let you submit a picture and give you a link in how to place it in! Remember the [img.] [./img] at the beginning and end of the url! (Put dots because the code wouldn't show otherwise, but it doesn't work with dots so remove them when you post ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Sweet_Tooth   Wed May 13, 2015 2:02 am

Ok take 3 character application
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PostSubject: Re: Sweet_Tooth   Wed May 13, 2015 5:00 am

Congratulations, you've been approved! Enjoy!
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