My Little Pony:Friendship is Magic OC RP
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Duckboxhouse



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Join date : 2015-01-17

PostSubject: My Oc i guess xD   Sat Jan 17, 2015 7:30 am

Harry

Gender: Female
Species: Earth Pony
Mane: Purple and white
Tail: Purple and white
Eyes: Bright Green
Body: Medium
Cutie Mark: N/A
Age (Baby,adult): Adolecent
Personality: Fun, out going, Stand offish if she doesnt know you.
Likes: Mares, Good times, Fisty cuffs
Dislikes: Wet bread, liers(although she can lie alot herself), Stallions
History: Growing up was a little hard for her as she didnt stay with her family long, After coming out as 'gay' she wasnt treated very nicely. She didnt let that stop her though, when she left she packed her bags and went to war, meeting a nice young mare there that she is very close to still. Harry and all her friends won the war only being a little scathed afterwards. Harry came home as a bit of a hero but soon ponies forgot what she did and she resorted back to her small home in the Everfree forest. Only her close friends from the war knew where she lived but no one visited her, Harry tries her best to go out and see others, having a soft spot for adventure herself so even though The towns folk ignored her completely she was rarely stayed in her home. Now she just wanders ponyville and sometimes hikes around to other locations, bumping into other pony folk who want to have some fun or like to have a friendly match of fistycuffs.

Example RP segment: (Refer to post below)
2. A secret admirer confesses his/her love to your OC. Given your OC’s personality, compose a brief narrative in which your OC identifies and addresses the situation.

She watches the stallion hide his face, red covering it within seconds. Harry smiled and put her hoof to his cheek softly. "You know just as well as i do that we cant be together" She said softly, sighing. "Im into the mares remember" She chuckled and shoved him a bit, earning a smile. "Dont worry though, here i hope this is worth your trouble" She leans over and pecks him on the snout.

[I HAve read the rules but i suck at this whole word finding thing i am so sorry]

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Doodle Bug



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PostSubject: Re: My Oc i guess xD   Sat Jan 17, 2015 4:58 pm

HI and welcome to the site!! I'm afraid your Personality needs to be a bit longer, I'd say at least 2 full paragraphs. Also, in the history, I'd add who her influences in life were and how she felt about her parents/siblings (if any). How they inspire her, teach her, etc... There are also a few grammar mistakes you should look over. ^_^ I'd add a bit more to the likes and dislikes (Possibly 5-10 things to really flesh out this character for all who look at these apps!) If she is an Adolescent, like you say, then shouldn't she've have had her cutiemark by then?

The Role-Playing segment is also really bare and as for the word, Check section C of the Character creation procedures, i) Creation Guidelines!

We're so glad you've wanted to join and hope you really enjoy yourself here amongst us! ^_^

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