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InuyaShuron



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Join date : 2014-06-28

PostSubject: Lovesong   Sat Jun 28, 2014 3:40 pm

Lovesong

Gender: Female
Species: Earth
Mane: Pink with a slight curl, though one side does curl in
Tail: Long and pink with a slight curl
Eyes: Amethyst Purple
Body: A cream/off white
Cutie Mark: Pink heart with a music note (picture i used doesn't have it drawn in, i apologize)
Age (Baby,adult): Adult
Personality: Lovesong is a kind soul, loving and tender to those around her.  She will often go out of her way to help another pony.  Because she cares so often about others, she tends to not worry about herself.  Her talent is matchmaking and writing love songs/poems.
Rp Segment:
A lost foal? Lovesong's amethyst eyes gazed upon the young foal crying in the street.  Surely it had to be lost, no mare in her right mind would leave her foal alone.  Gracefully she trotted up to it, bending down her neck to it.  "What is wrong, small one?"  The foal looked up at her with its big eyes.  "I... I lost my mother."  Lovesong blinked at it.  "Do you know where she was last?  What does she look like?"  The foal sniffed and discribed his mother.  "Come with me, little one, we will find her."  The foal stood and off they went to find the foal's mother.

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Doodle Bug



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PostSubject: Re: Lovesong   Sat Jun 28, 2014 11:56 pm

Looks good except you need a bit more added onto the personality and Rp segment since it kind of cuts off abruptly. You're also missing the history bit along with the likes and dislikes :P

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