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MintySwirls



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Join date : 2014-05-23

PostSubject: Minty Swirls   Fri May 23, 2014 1:12 am

YOUR NAME Minty Swirls

Gender:Mare/female
Species: Pegisus
Mane: Black and Teal
Tail: Black and Teal
Eyes: Baby Blue
Body: normal mare
Cutie Mark: two hearts, one all black and one with a black outline and teal inside
Age (Baby,adult): adult
Personality: shy but opens up to friends
Likes: Mint milkshakes,reading, hanging out at the library and Sugarcube Corner, mysteries
Dislikes: fire, horror movies, scary stories, campouts (unless with Applejack), and peppers
History: she grew up in Cloudsdale and lived in a normal home with no siblings but both parents who where very protective of her, which is how she got her shy personality. She loved making milkshakes so now that she has moved to Ponyville she hopes to get a job at Sugarcube Corner and she loves hanging out with Pinkie Pie.

Example RP segment: Hi! Nice to meet you!

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MintySwirls



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PostSubject: Re: Minty Swirls   Fri May 23, 2014 1:34 am

How do i edit?
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Join date : 2012-07-28
Location : United Kingdom

PostSubject: Re: Minty Swirls   Fri May 23, 2014 3:23 am

In the top right corner of the post, there should be a box that says 'edit.'

Your app is looking good so far but needs adding to in places. The personality should be several sentences of explaining the character's personality.

You will need to either add an image of your OC or add to her physical descriptions (e.g mane/tail style and length).

Also, you should remove the parts about Applejack and Pinkie Pie from the app, since we cannot interact with show characters, and the history could do with being a little longer. Perhaps you could explain how Minty got her cutie mark.

Lastly, the RP segment needs to be longer and an example of how you will roleplay in threads. Have a look at any of my OC's apps for examples (links below)

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MintySwirls



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PostSubject: Re: Minty Swirls   Fri May 23, 2014 2:05 pm

Its not there, and im sorry i will fix thosebproblems as soon as i can find the edit. Im not lying, im searching the whole screen and there is nothing to press. And i do have an image i just didnt at the time i made this and i made the picture myself i just need to add it
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PostSubject: Re: Minty Swirls   Fri May 23, 2014 2:54 pm

If that's the case, the you'll have to make a new app with the updated information and image.

Sorry for the inconvenience.

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PostSubject: Re: Minty Swirls   Fri May 23, 2014 7:02 pm

Its alright! I will amidiatly thank you for the help
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PostSubject: Re: Minty Swirls   Fri May 23, 2014 7:03 pm

Teehee i spelled Immediately wrong :)
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