My Little Pony:Friendship is Magic OC RP
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My Little Pony:Friendship is Magic OC RP

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Everlove1028



Posts : 3
Join date : 2013-11-20
Age : 20
Location : Bedroom

PostSubject: Template..   Wed Nov 20, 2013 11:26 pm

size=29]Everlove
Look at profile picture.
Gender:Female
Species:Earth Pony
Mane:Pink
Tail:pink
Eyes:blue
Body:purple
Cutie Mark:3 pink hearts
Age (Baby,adult):Adult
Personality:Fun, annoying, cant focus well, happy,outgoing, princess worthy
Likes:Soft cookies, Playing games, Valentines day, love, Friends,candy
Dislikes:Cake,Sports,Jerks,Being bored,rude people,sarcasim.
History: When a foal got cutie mark really late, Was straight As, lost a lot of family on own..

Example RP segment: Um confused.. but i know rules i read them. c: i hope you enjoyed c:
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Wild Card



Posts : 1335
Join date : 2012-07-30
Age : 18
Location : Isn't this exactly where you'd like me?

PostSubject: Re: Template..   Thu Nov 21, 2013 9:28 am

You need to be more descriptive in your app. Explain the style of mane and tail rather than just the color. Same for body. The personality should be a paragraph, rather than a few words. And the history needs to be WAY longer and more descriptive. Talk more about her foalhood and her family and how she got her cutie mark. And if you're not going to use a picture, then you need to be really descriptive. Profile picture doesn't count. And you're missing a special word showing that you read the rules :3

And the rp segments are under the template. You just roleplay your OC in any of the 5 scenarios, and they are here now

1. A foal has lost its mother and is sobbing inconsolably in the street . Given your OC’s personality, compose a brief narrative in which your OC identifies and addresses the situation.

2. A secret admirer confesses his/her love to your OC. Given your OC’s personality, compose a brief narrative in which your OC identifies and addresses the situation.

3. It is pouring rain outside. Your OC spots the light of a tavern up ahead. The tavern is filled with ponies that your OC doesn't know. Given your OC’s personality, compose a brief narrative in which your OC identifies and addresses the situation.

4. Your OC is framed by a robber who plants his weapon on him/her. A Guardpony threatens to take your OC into custody. Given your OC’s personality, compose a brief narrative in which your OC identifies and addresses the situation.

5. A colt is bullying a filly in the Manehattan street. When your OC looks to him, he turns to your OC and snaps, "What're you looking at?" Given your OC’s personality, compose a brief narrative in which your OC identifies and addresses the situation.
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