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timelordblake



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PostSubject: Dark-Xertion   Fri Oct 25, 2013 8:48 pm

Dark-Xertion

Gender: Male
Species: Earth Pony
Mane: Neon Green Mane
Tail: Neon Green Tail
Eyes: Has Hazel eyes. No pony sees them however since he always wears glasses with green Lenses that cover his eyes.
Body: He has a Naturally black body color. Once he became an anarchist however he painted green stripes onto his body.
Cutie Mark: Green Spectrum Wave
Age (Baby,adult): 27
Personality: Dark has a very complicated past. As such he has a very complicated personality. He acts dark and mysterious, but truly inside he suffers from immense turns of sadness and grief over his lost mare friend, Crystal Flare. Truly on the inside he wishes for attention from someone.

He has in the past had some run-ins with Authorities and due to these run-ins he has developed a distinct Anarchic type of behavior. He dislikes the thought of being pushed around by people, such as the authorities and government, who don't understand his situation.

After he lost his Mare Friend he became distant from other ponies. He has no friends nor does he want any friends. He goes through life with an understanding that "Friendship will reach into your roots. Then grab and twist them until you fall down dead." Sadly this means he doesn't act kindly around any other ponies, either.

Likes: Anarchy, Chaos, Fighting anyone in Authority over someone.
Dislikes: Oppression, Helping Others, Friendship, Authority, Ponies trying to boss him around

History: Dark-Xertion was born in Ponyville. His Parents were both teachers so education was very important in the family. he first attended Ponyville Elementary and was one of the classes top, and most adored, students.  At the age of 16 He had graduated High School and was one of the most well-known, smartest, and most liked Pony in Ponyville's High School. It was on the day of his graduation where he met the love of his life, a Pink Unicorn with a Black and Pink mane known as Crystal Flare.

Crystal Flare wasn't all sunshine and rainbows though. She had a very bad reputation that Dark-Xertion didn't know about. After 3 months of dating Crystal still hadn't revealed what she had done in past years to Dark, who seemed oblivious to it all. One day as he was heading over to her house he saw her get dragged away by the police. Not understanding why he ran up to the police and demanded she be let go. His words fell on deaf ears however as she was taken to Ponyville jail.

This even turned Dark's Life upside-down. After she was taken away Dark began to grow more distant from other ponies. He began to get lower and lower grades. His Teachers and Parents finally noticed this and sent him to a local psychiatrist. His attitude after seeing the Psychiatrist improved some until the day Crystal was let out of jail. Dark was happy to see her, but quickly became heart-broken when he saw crystal walk out of jail hugging another pony.

After seeing this Dark went from bad to worse. He began to grow more violent in class and began to grow hostile towards any pony who tried to be friends with him. Believing he needed somepony to blame, Dark placed the blame on the Ponyville police for taking his Marefriend to the jail where he was replaced. he vowed then and there he would get revenge. The next day he had taken off leaving his household behind.

His parents were naturally worried and asked the police to find him. Now not only was he attempting to run from his past, he was trying to evade the police. This led him to the city of Manehatten. Here he discovered a group of anarchist ponies known as The Fuerza de Liberación Pony, or The Pony Liberation Force. This group was a group of Anarchists whose goal was to restore Equestria to a state of complete "pony power". Dark quickly took the opportunity up to join. His intiation task was to go to the City Hall of Manehatten and spray paint the name of the Anarchist group on the wall. He did so without any hesitation and after he did so, he was accepted into the group.

His first Mission with the group was an attack on the Chief of Manehatten's Police Force. They waited until the chief was alone and struck. This was however a trap devised by the police force to get rid of the troubling Fuerza de Liberación Pony. as the group was ambushed all the members left Dark to fend for himself. Thankfully, Dark managed to escape. Giving up on having friends Dark decided that he needed to hide. from both the Authorities and That traitorous Anarchy group.

He was able to hide away in the Slums of Manehatten amongst the poor and sick. Being there makes dark wish that he could do something to stop how poorly these citizens were being treated by the Guards, police, Upper-class, nobles and the Anarchist groups.


Example RP segment: (Okay here I go  4. Your OC is framed by a robber who plants his weapon on him/her. A Guardpony threatens to take your OC into custody. Given your OC’s personality, compose a brief narrative in which your OC identifies and addresses the situation.)


Dark-Xertion kept to the dark as much as he could. He preferred knowing that no pony could see him.  That way he knew he was safe from those idiotic Cops and traitorous anarchists. Suddenly he heard hooves behind him. Turning around he could only see a shadow of some pony running away from him. Dark-Xertion shrugged, he didn't like to bother himself with other ponies business at all. That's when he heard the sound of at least 3 Ponies coming towards him.

"There he is," One of the ponies with a beard yelled as he ran towards dark. it only took dark a split second before he knew what was going on. The Police had found him, but how? His question was answered sooner than expected. As the pony with the beard spoke.

"Look we Know that she gave you the weapon. This makes you the accomplice she kept mentioning over and over again." Dark stared at the cops confused before turning around and walking off. The Cop with the beard then grabbed Darks shoulder. Dark stared at him.

"Did you just touch me," Dark asked before raising his hoof and connecting it with the Cops cheek. The cop with the beard was taken by surprise and knocked out cold by the punch. The other two police then were able to recognize the pony they were up against. They looked at each other smiled and began advancing towards Dark.

Remembering what he had learned through avoid these bumbling idiots, he jumped up into the sky just high enough to do what he planned to. In order to get enough height he then kicked one of the guards to get a better push off into the sky. Thus allowing him to jump right over the two cops. The cop which had been kicked fell down as the last cop slowly backed up.

Dark-Xertion smiled and turned around as the last cop simply whistled and walked off as if he had seen nothing. He felt around for the weapon they were talking about. Eventually his hoof brushed up against the weapon. Dark picked it up to investigate it. It was a knife. What shocked him the most was what he saw engraved on the knife.

"Your past always catches up to you doesn't it- Crystal"

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PostSubject: Re: Dark-Xertion   Fri Oct 25, 2013 9:31 pm

It's a good start, I can't wait until it's done!
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PostSubject: Re: Dark-Xertion   Fri Oct 25, 2013 10:54 pm

Thanks
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PostSubject: Re: Dark-Xertion   Sat Oct 26, 2013 11:19 pm

Wow, your app is really dark. I've spoken to the other staff about it and this is what they said, "It doesn't seem appropriate for the setting that we try to maintain on the forum." So I'm sorry, this is waay too dark. If you could lighten the mood of it it'd be fine except, you need how he got his cutiemark somewhere in the history and explain what his cutiemark means.
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PostSubject: Re: Dark-Xertion   Sat Oct 26, 2013 11:48 pm

Well then. I'm out of ideas..... shoot. Hmm... okay then. I have a second OC I have thought of. Ill have it up later.
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