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HallowsEve



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Join date : 2013-10-08
Age : 22
Location : St. Joe's Branch of Ponyville

PostSubject: HallowsEve   Wed Oct 09, 2013 1:42 am

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HallowsEve
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Gender:Female

Species:Unicorn

Mane:Orange/Black Long with Straight Bangs
Tail: Orange/Black Long

Eyes:Brown, No pupils

Body:Purple w/ Black Zebra Marks

Cutie Mark: Hissy Orange Cat

Age (Baby,adult):Mare

Personality: HallowsEve is a very sweet and happy pony. She can be bull-headed but is always playful and ready to cuddle. She's very curious and always ready for an adventure, though she can be a bit of a clutz. She's also a little untrusting because of her past where other ponies made fun of her and this really holds her back when it comes to making new friends. So when she does make friends she tries to spend every moment she can with them as though they could be seperated at anytime. When she's with her friends this pony is the happiest and best pony to be around, whether its going on wild adventures or just siting around she's one of those ponies you dont easily forget.

Likes: Autumn leaves, bucking leaves off of the autumn trees, Halloween, Scaring ponies, Pranking ponies, Trolling ponies, and Hanging with friends

Dislikes:Really cold weather, Being woke up early, Sour food, and Homework

History: Hallows Eve got her name because she was born on Nightmare Night and everything about her shows it. She even resides in an oversized dead tree, decorated with many Halloween-like things.  She lives alone with a black cat named Crescent (since she has a white crescent moon on her head). She's a bit of a loner and has issues fitting in but can always be seen pulling a good humored prank on her favorite holiday: Nightmare Night. Scaring ponies along with pranking others has always been her favorite hoby but it just seems more fun on Nightmare Night. Growing up, Hallows Eve was made fun of by the other fillies for her strange colors and her interests.  She kept herself away from many people, isolating herself as much as possible from others to avoid the teasing.  Hallows Eve has very few friends, but keeps the ones she has close

Like everything else about her, HallowsEve got her mark on Nightmare Night. It was also the night she met her cat, crescent. She had been wandering out alone on her birthday as always, unsure of what to do or where to go. As she was walking she could hear some ponies talking, curious she went to investigate and what she found were some little fillies gathered around a camp fire telling scary stories. She smiled to herself as she listened to the story. As it was nearing the climax she felt something brush her leg and jumped out of her hiding place screaming. This caused all the fillies to flee in terror. Looking down she realized it was just a cat and looking up she saw the terrified faces of the fillies and burst out laughing. She loved the feeling of being scared and she realized she loved the feeling of scaring too. She looked down to pet the cat when she noticed she had her cutie mark.



Example RP segment: (Refer to post below)#2

On a cloudy and calm day, Hallows Eve decided to take a stroll through town to go grocery shopping when somepony bumped into her.  

"Whoops sorry.  Oh hey Hallow", said a familiar voice.  Turning around, she saw Ferice, her best colt friend, who had bumped into her.  

"Oh hey Ferice", Hallow replied.  "What are you up to?"

"I was about to go exploring the woods and do some creek jumping.  You up for it?"

Looking at her list, Hallows was hesitant.  She wanted to get her shopping done, but then again, she didn't see Ferice very often and wanted to spend time with him.  After a few minutes of pondering, she decided to go.

"Sure, it sounds like fun", Hallow said getting all pumped up.  "Let me go home and put my bag away and then we can go."

Hallow ran home and returned to town, meeting up with Ferice.  She followed Ferice to the outskirts of town where the White Tail Woods started.  Ferice began walking through the thicket, with Hallow right behind him.  After a few minutes they reached the creek and began exploring.  They discovered many different animal tracks and a myriad of plants alongside the creek.  Suddenly, Hallow spotted something shiny near the bank and went to investigate.  Once she made it to the shiny object, she slipped in the mud and tumbled into the creek.  Ferice saw and immediately came over with a tree branch.

"Hurry Hallow and grab on!  The current is too strong for you to hold on too long!"  Struggling against the current, she managed to grab the branch with her mouth while Ferice was able to pull her up.  When Hallow was safely in the grass, they rested, since they were tired and out of breath.  "Are you okay Hallow?"

"Yeah, I'm fine", Hallow panted.  "I just saw a shiny thing and was going to look at it." Ferice then gets up to where Hallow pointed to the location of the shiny object.  To Hallow's disappointment, he returned with a bottlecap.

"You mean this Hallow", Ferice said, dropping the bottlecap beside her.  "I spotted this where you slipped and saw it shimmering in the light."

"Aw I thought it was a necklace or something cool like that." Hallows looked at the ground, disappointed.  Ferice sat beside her and nuzzled her.

"Don't worry Hallow, we'll find something cool eventually."  He then hugged her, slightly blushing.  "Come on, let's go home for today.  That's enough exploring."

Heading back to town, Hallow noticed something different about Ferice.  Was he blushing?  She thought.  Hallow wanted to test it out and 'accidentally' tripped on him.

"Sorry about that Ferice", she said, silently giggling.  When she glanced over, she saw that he was blushing madly.  Mission Accomplished She said smiling to herself.  

"Hallow, I have to tell you something", Ferice said hesitantly.  Hallow stopped and gave him her full attention.  "I...like...you...a lot..." He lowered his head, hiding his deep red blush as much as possible.

"I know you do", Hallow said smiling.  "I could tell when you blushed after nuzzling me."

"Well...do you...you know...like me back?"  The question made Hallows heart pound.  She always had liked him.  Every time he was around, she could be herself and he wouldn't judge her.  He also comforted her when she was down and stood up for her if he caught ponies picking on her.  Hallow walked over to him and nuzzled her face into his neck.

"Yes, Ferice, I like you very much."  

"W-what?  Really?"  Ferice was taken aback.  Hallow nodded and held him in a warm embrace.

"Yes, ever since you stood up for me for the first time."  Ferice smiled a big toothy grin and hugged her back.

"Good, I'm glad."

[acceptance]


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PostSubject: Re: HallowsEve   Wed Oct 09, 2013 2:03 am

Your personality is really bare so make it at least a paragraph And the only mention of a swamp is in the everfree forest which is forbidden for ponies to reside in.

And only coming out during halloween means you'll use her once this year and I think she would be a better NPC rather than an actual char.
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PostSubject: Re: HallowsEve   Wed Oct 09, 2013 3:04 am

hows this?
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PostSubject: Re: HallowsEve   Wed Oct 09, 2013 3:24 am

You still need to be adding more onto the personality and explaining how she got her cutiemark. In the Rp segment, you'll need to explain which woods you are exploring.
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PostSubject: Re: HallowsEve   Wed Oct 09, 2013 11:24 am

ok hows that
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PostSubject: Re: HallowsEve   Wed Oct 09, 2013 9:22 pm

Like everything else about her, HallowsEve got her mark on Nightmare Night. It was also the night she met her cat, crescent. She had been wandering out alone on her birthday as always, unsure of what to do or where to go. As she was walking she could hear some ponies talking, curious she went to investigate and what she found were some little fillies gathered around a camp fire telling scary stories. She smiled to herself as she listened to the story. As it was nearing the climax she felt something brush her leg and jumped out of her hiding place screaming. This caused all the fillies to flee in terror. Looking down she realized it was just a cat and looking up she saw the terrified faces of the fillies and burst out laughing. She loved the feeling of being scared and she realized she loved the feeling of scaring too. She looked down to pet the cat when she noticed she had her cutie mark.

Move this part into history and you're golden.
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PostSubject: Re: HallowsEve   Wed Oct 09, 2013 10:34 pm

ok ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: HallowsEve   Wed Oct 09, 2013 10:40 pm

APPROVED
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