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Pwny



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PostSubject: Magic Notes   Mon Sep 09, 2013 8:21 pm

Magic Notes

Gender: Stallion

Species: Earth

Mane: Violet, and ice blue.

Tail: Same color as mane.

Eyes: Green

Body: White

Cutie Mark: An Ace of Spades playing card.

Age: Adult

Personality: Practical, traditional and organized. Likely active to be in athletic events. He not interested in theory or abstraction unless he can see the practical application. Has clear visions of the way things should be. He is loyal and hard-working. He likes to be in charge. Exceptionally capable in organizing and running activities. Disapproves violent confrontation.

Likes: Plans, events, bottle-caps, magic tricks (not Unicorn magic). Flirting with mares.

Dislikes: Not having a story to read. Not having his cards. Violent confrontations.

History: Magic Notes has unicorn parents, however due to a "unlucky" recessive gene on his mother's side he was born an Earth Pony. Magic Notes grew up in a middle class neighborhood filled with mostly unicorns. He took advantage of him being a Earth Pony, genetically stronger than the unicorns that lived there.

His father, having his special talent in magic, disapproved of what is son's race was. This caused Magic Notes to learn magic tricks, card illusions and mind tricks. Eventually he left his house and became a magician thus earning his Cutie Mark.

Example RP segment: (Refer to post below)
3. It is pouring rain outside. Your OC spots the light of a tavern up ahead. The tavern is filled with ponies that your OC doesn't know. Given your OC’s personality, compose a brief narrative in which your OC identifies and addresses the situation.

Magic Notes quickly walked down the street. He normally tollerated rain, but having been caught in it was terrible.
"This night's gonna be bad." He thought out-loud. Noticing a tavern light up ahead he galloped to it.
Opening the door he studied his surroundings. It was filled with friendly ponies. Being sure he wiped his hooves on the mat, he sat at a table. A lime green waitress approached.
"Can I get you anything?" She asked.
"Do you mind if I do a magic trick on you?" Magic Notes asked.
"Okay what's your magic trick?" She asked.
He fanned out a deck of cards. She knew that she had to pick one. The card she picked was a six of hearts. She put in back in the deck. He then split the deck in twelve piles. Taking away two at a time.
"You know a magician never gives away his secrets," He said "but I may make an exception for somepony as pretty as you." as he lifted the top card of the last pile showing a six of hearts. The waitress giggled.
Maybe this night won't be so bad. He thought.


Acceptance


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Dawn Orchard



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PostSubject: Re: Magic Notes   Mon Sep 09, 2013 9:41 pm

I like him! Sadly, I am no mod, so all I can give you is a "I like it!" I can not approve :c Sad, I know. Anyways, hope the mods approve and when they do I shall have the honor of being the first to comment!
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PostSubject: Re: Magic Notes   Tue Sep 10, 2013 5:54 am

Welcome to the site Pwny :)

You've got a good OC here. It's almost approvable.

The only issue is that "phones" are in the Likes section, when they have yet to become canon in the show. Simply remove that and your OC can be approved.

Also, just double check for grammar mistakes in the future ;)

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Pwny



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PostSubject: Re: Magic Notes   Tue Sep 10, 2013 10:24 am

Fireseeker wrote:
Welcome to the site Pwny :)

You've got a good OC here. It's almost approvable.

The only issue is that "phones" are in the Likes section, when they have yet to become canon in the show. Simply remove that and your OC can be approved.

Also, just double check for grammar mistakes in the future ;)
The task as been finished.

P.S. Thank you Dawn Orchard.
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PostSubject: Re: Magic Notes   Tue Sep 10, 2013 11:43 am

Changes made.

Your character has been approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Magic Notes   Mon Sep 16, 2013 7:20 pm

Thank you Mr. Fireseeker.
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