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Doodle Bug

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PostSubject: Enchantalu   Sun Jul 28, 2013 4:32 am




Mane:Shades of grey and white ranging from all shades, pure white to dark grey. (I know it doesn't show a mane but there is one)

Tail:Shades of grey and white ranging from all shades, pure white to dark grey.


Body: blood red

Cutie Mark: A turquoise rose drawing out a turquoise smilie face

Age: 19

Personality: Enchantalu is a very spring loaded pony with tons of energy and happiness which she loves to spread around. Enchantalu is very shy but will warm up to you in a hurry if you are kind. She loves just about everything adventurous and dangerous or thrilling there is out there. You wouldn't find a weirder pony if you tried since she is just about as random as she can get.

Likes: the color turquoise, nice ponies, handsome stallions and just about almost everything you can imagine. She loves adventure and excitement anywhere at any time

Dislikes: Annoying ponies, long distant relationships, ponies fighting or arguing, bad headaches, being sick

History: Enchantalu grew up near the White Tail woods and always loved every chance she could get to explore them. One night while she was out she got lost and her parents frantically searched for her for days on end and were about to give up hope until they saw her running for her life back towards the cabin chased by an angry swarm of bees. Once safely behind the locked door she let out a huge sigh in relief that she wasn't stung. "Heh, I only asked them nicely for their honey but they didn't want to give me any, then they got mad at me constantly knocking on their hive." She said with a huge smile then hugged her parents tightly and went to bed.

The very next day there was a knock at her door. When she went to open it an olden pony in a damp grey cloak quickly backed away from the light hissing. "L-lights... P-please." Enchant quickly turned off the lights and the olden pony came out of the shadows once more. "Your destiny awaits, my young filly." Then quickly handed her a small pouch and quickly scurried off into the night. "Use this wisely!" Were her fading words as she galloped away. Enchant quickly closed the door and placed the small pouch on the table and flipped on the lights. 'What even is this?' she thought looking at the pouch with a puzzled expression. "Your destiny will be revealed soon!" Upon hearing those words come from the small pouch she gasped sharply and took a step back. "O-okay... now I'm scared... u-um..." Her face hardened then she took a step towards the pouch and slowly opened it then suddenly was surrounded by a blue mist that swirled around her and lifted her off the ground. "May your destiny make all of Equestria a better place! You will now spread light and love throughout Equestria starting with everypony you will meet."

When the voice faded so did the blue mist and she was dropped back onto the ground with a soft clap of her hooves meeting the stone cold floor. "Huh... well that was... something." When she turned around she noticed something on her flank. "Oh my gosh! I got my cutie mark!" It was the most beautiful cutie mark she had ever seen! A turquoise rose pen drawing out a turquoise smilie face.

It was a cold winters morning as the sun shimmered through the frost in the trees with the humble yet comforting stillness all around her. She quietly sloshed through the snow searching for food and began to think back to everything that had happened to her. It was 10 years ago when she had first left her parent's home in search of 'fun' things to do. While trotting through the woods she had found an old abandoned shack. It was so awesome how the snow just shimmered around it in the sunlight giving it a sort of mystical look. She knew there had to be something weirdly familiar about this place then bared her fangs and let out a sharp hiss. This was her home the night she had gotten her cutie mark but nothing could have prepared her for what would happen next, clenching her teeth tightly she let the warm crystal tears flow down her furry cheeks as she remembered the sudden spark that went off and killed both of her parents. Now orphaned and alone, she had to fight for her survival learning tricks of the trade but first thing was first, she had to check to see if there was any sign of life left in her parents.

She went over to check the breathing and heart rate of her now charred parents only to find there was none. "M-m-mommy? D-daddy? Oh no!" She cried for hours on end then weakly wiped the tears away and buried them both without another single tear shed. From that day on she vowed to never let anypony close to her ever again and even now holds true to that vow but thinking back to it now, it was still strange that nothing else in the cabin was touched. Nothing burned but their bodies with their room and bed fully intact without a scratch. For 10 years now she's been living alone, in a cabin she made herself, nestled deep within the White Tail woods, so far off the beaten trail where nopony could possibly find her.

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PostSubject: Re: Enchantalu   Sun Jul 28, 2013 7:19 am

Doodle, you appear to have missed out an RP segment. Yes, it seems a little redundant considering you've been a member for a while but rules are rules are rules.

Also, don't forget to check your spelling and grammar, as well as titling the History section.

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PostSubject: Re: Enchantalu   Sun Jul 28, 2013 7:40 pm

I know I'm not done yet
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