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princess sky



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PostSubject: Kodiak   Tue Jul 02, 2013 6:24 am

Kodiak


Gender:Male.
Species:Unicorn.
Mane:Light blue with creamy stripes.
Tail:Same with the mane light blue with creamy stripes.
Eyes:Light-ish darkish green.
body:white skinny body.
Cutie Mark:A green and white camera.

Age (Baby,adult):Stallion

Personality:Kodiak's personality is taking pictures, he wants to be a director or a camera guy or both.He brings his camera everywhere, he likes taking pictures of nature but he isn't the type of pony that likes getting outside.He likes taking pictures inside but he thinks its a good way to explore.

Likes:Likes camera's,taking pictures,making friends though Kodiak is a camera pony he is use to pony's asking him to take there picture.

Dislikes:Flash that comes from his camera,bullies,rain.

History:Kodiak lived with his parent's until he turned 17 he is an only child and is proud to be one.He has no friends (if u count a camera as a friend)
Kodiak got his first camera when he was 5,he didn't know how to use it until he was 6 when he turned 17 he found a beautiful 2 story house he collected money from his daily job that is taking pictures with super models he bought his house and moved his stuff inside his house,when he turned 18 he got another camera but a better one he started thinking of maybe being a photographer even though that was his job he wanted to be a free photographer and a payed one.

A foal has lost its mother and is sobbing inconsolably in the street . Given your OC’s personality, compose a brief narrative in which your OC identifies and addresses the situation.

Example RP segment:Kodiak was walking around with his brand new camera he bought from the camera store,he walked down a alley way when he herd a foul crying.He went up to the foul but tried not to look like a thief or a criminal,"um excuse me are you okay little filly are you hurt?"asked quietly not to scare the filly,the filly looked up and saw Kodiak and started to cry again."Oh please stop crying um here have a lollipop"nervously said Kodiak pulling out a lollipop,out of his camera bag so he won't get hungry later but it was in good use now "here you go"smiled Kodiak,Kodiak handed the lollipop to the young filly,she stopped crying and got up "um *sniffs* thank you"smiled the filly "no problem but what's wrong why are you all alone?A criminal can grab you and take you away"told Kodiak "that's the problem i lost my mummy"cried the filly,"oh um here i'll help you find your mummy"smiled Kodiak,"really"said the filly trying to stop crying."of course come on i'll let you look at the photos i took and you can take photos if you want i don't mind"smiled Kodiak to the young filly "oh thank you thank you"smiled the filly,the filly hugged Kodiak and they went looking for the filly's mother.

(acceptance)


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PostSubject: Re: Kodiak   Tue Jul 02, 2013 1:48 pm

Please complete by adding history and RP example, as well as re-reading/remembering the rules about OC apps.

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PostSubject: Re: Kodiak   Tue Jul 02, 2013 7:39 pm

Sorry I did it yesterday and I felt tired but I promise I will finish it today well ill try to
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PostSubject: Re: Kodiak   Wed Jul 03, 2013 4:20 am

Fireseeker wrote:
Please complete by adding history and RP example, as well as re-reading/remembering the rules about OC apps.
Sorry I did it yesterday and I felt tired but I promise I will finish it today well ill try to
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PostSubject: Re: Kodiak   Wed Jul 03, 2013 7:26 pm

Try to include more spacing and paragraphing in you roleplaying, as your RP segment is rather cluttered. Just a note though.

Changes have been made.

Your character has been approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Kodiak   Wed Jul 03, 2013 8:14 pm

Thank u so much ill do that in the future
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