Wetnare

Wetnare

Gender:Male
Species: Earth pony
Mane: straight, short and pale blue
Tail: The same as his mane
Eyes:Dark blue
Body: Dull white
Cutie Mark: Rippled water
Age (Baby, adult): Stallion
Personality: Happy, friendly, shy, courageous and gentleman like if he was your friend you could count on him.
Likes: Water, the beach, friends and food
Dislikes: Movies that make no sense , long stories and people being mean/stupid  
History: Originally born in Manehatten Wetnare was not good enough for his parents because they were social but he certainly wasn't so they chucked him out to go and live on the streets. He formed a lot of courage and respect for other ponies. Wetnare met Music Records when they where fillies even when Music was evil he still believed she could change back to a kind pony.

Wetnare saw a little filly on the pathway crying it made him sad. "Well hello there little filly are you ok?" Wetnare said kindly to this poor foal. "N-n-no I'm not ok I lost my mum please help me find her-?" she asked still sobbing. "oh of course I'll help you, now where did you see your mum last?" he asked gently. "that's the problem I don't know where she was last time I saw her" the poor filly sniffed. "Come on lets go find your mummy OK!". They both looked for the fillies mum.

sorry I forgot his eye colour I'll do it later sorry about that

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