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Dark The Pegasus



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PostSubject: Berry twist (READY!)   Fri Jun 21, 2013 9:19 pm

                                  Berry Twist






Gender: female


Species: earth pony


Mane: braided.


Tail: same as mane


Eyes: a normal crystal-ish aqua.


Body: bright pink.


Cutie Mark: a lollipop with pink and white swirls on it


Age: mare


Personality: Berry twist is not shy at all. she is very friendly and caring, and very excitable. She loves spending time with friends, even though they can be a real pain at times. Berry twist loves going places, so she spends a lot of time taking her friends to different places. she is happy for anypony to join in on her little group of friends.


Likes: sweets, friends, nice sunny days, swimming.


Dislikes: vegtables, enimes, The dark.


History: Berry twist was born in ponyville. she had a very nice family. Her parents were very kind. Berry twist never really knew her other family members. but she didnt care. she loved her parents so much she didnt even bother asking about it. One day Berry twist's parents offered to take her to sugarcube corner for the first time. Berry twist heard the word ''sugar'' and knew she was going to love it. she certianly did.  She loved everything. but there was one thing in particular: the lollipops. Berry twist adored those, and she loved the patterns. epecially the ones that are in a spiral. Berry twist spent hours at sugarcube corner, not realising she had suddenly gotten her cutie mark after the enjoyment of the lollipop. Berry twist noticed the cutie mrk when she got home. Up to know berry twist lives on her own since her parents moved to canterlot, and she visits sugarcube corner almost every day!

Example RP segment:  A colt is bullying a filly in the Manehattan street. When your OC looks to him, he turns to your OC and snaps, "What're you looking at?" Given your OC’s personality, compose a brief narrative in which your OC identifies and addresses the situation.


Berry twist trotted around ponyville. she was headed for sugarcube corner. on the way there, she spotted a colt bullying a filly. Berry twist trotted over and stood in front of the filly. ''Hey! that's not fair. how would you like it if i called you names? i know you wouldn't like it. So dont bully a filly! you bullying the filly is just like bullying yourself! so dont do it again ok?'' She said to the bully with a sort of stern look on her face.



[acceptance?]


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PostSubject: Re: Berry twist (READY!)   Fri Jun 21, 2013 9:21 pm

The personality section is rather bare. Expand more on that and get back to me.
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PostSubject: Re: Berry twist (READY!)   Fri Jun 21, 2013 9:25 pm

Changes made. Thou art APPROVED
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PostSubject: Re: Berry twist (READY!)   Fri Jun 21, 2013 9:26 pm

*tackle hugs*
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PostSubject: Re: Berry twist (READY!)   Sat Jun 22, 2013 6:43 am

*laughs and huggles back* D'aww
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