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PinkiePie101



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PostSubject: Sweet Treat   Wed May 22, 2013 6:48 am

SWEET TREAT



Gender: Female
Species: Earth pony
Mane: Hot pink
Tail: Hot pink
Eyes: Light green
Body: Light Yellow
Cutie Mark: A cupcake with hot pink icing and green wrapping
Age (Baby,adult): Adult
Personality: Sweet Treat is nice but also rather shy, yet not as shy as Fluttershy. She is also a bit insecure and because of that she used to be a bully in high school. She has a sweet tooth and is always willing to share treats with her friends. She is also a very deep sleeper and gets cranky easily if woken up early. She is also not the most athletic of all ponies, prefering to garden or cook rather than run.
Likes: Cupcakes, baking, cookies, friends, tulips, the colour yellow
Dislikes: Licorice, the colour indigo, night time, snakes
History: Sweet Treat grew up in Fillydelphia and went to the Fillydelphia national school. She had few friends in primary school, and when she moved to high school she was a bully. She earn't her cutie mark in a bake sale when she was six years old. Once she matured she moved to Ponyville in hopes of earning a job at Sugarcube Corner. Once she arrived she decided to set up her own store, Sweet's Treats. She lives in a small two-story cottage near town square.

Example RP segment: (Refer to post below)

Raindrops started falling from the sky, and Sweet Treat looked up at the pegasi kicking the clouds to make lighting flash.

"Oh no!" she cried, starting to gallop. She had flour in her saddlebags and she didn't want it all to turn to dough before she even had it in her kitchen. A dim light from a tavern cast a welcoming glow as the sky grew darker, and with the prompt of a rumble of menacing thunder, she dashed inside.

She shyly slunk inside, but it soon became apparent the ponies inside didn't care about her sudden arrival. She sat down in a chair and melted into the background, even ordering a small glass of wine and gossiping with a few unicorns seated near her. Soon the sky grew clear and she trotted off, into the sunny day.

Acceptance


Last edited by Fireseeker on Sat Jun 01, 2013 7:55 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Problems with image)
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mcewanman



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PostSubject: Re: Sweet Treat   Wed May 22, 2013 7:36 am

Rather brief. Expand on the history and personality sections and you'll be golden.
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PostSubject: Re: Sweet Treat   Thu May 23, 2013 5:09 am

Edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Sweet Treat   Mon May 27, 2013 7:55 pm

It's getting better, but it's still far too brief. Look into the Earth ponies, Pegasi, Unicorn and nonstandard races sections for examples of Approved Apps.
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PostSubject: Re: Sweet Treat   Sat Jun 01, 2013 7:56 pm

Details are sufficient now.

Your character has been approved.

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