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PinkiePie101



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PostSubject: Sweet Treat   Tue May 21, 2013 5:57 am

SWEET TREAT
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Gender: Female
Species: Earth pony
Mane: Hot pink in Cherry Berry's style
Tail: Hot pink also in Cherry's style.
Eyes: Light green
Body: Light Yellow
Cutie Mark: A cupcake with hot pink icing and green wrapping
Age (Baby,adult): Adult
Personality: Kind, has a sweet tooth, generous, timid, good cook, was a bully when younger
Likes: Cupcakes, baking, cookies, friends, tulips, the colour yellow
Dislikes: Licorice, the colour indigo, night time, snakes
History: Grew up in Fillydelphia until she was eleven years old. Was a bully in high school because in primary school she had been bullied for being an earth pony.

Example RP segment: (Refer to post below)

Raindrops started falling from the sky, and Sweet Treat looked up at the pegasi kicking the clouds to make lighting flash.

"Oh no!" she cried, starting to gallop. She had flour in her saddlebags and she didn't want it all to turn to dough before she even had it in her kitchen. A dim light from a tavern cast a welcoming glow as the sky grew darker, and with the prompt of a rumble of menacing thunder, she dashed inside.

She shyly slunk inside, but it soon became apparent the ponies inside didn't care about her sudden arrival. She sat down in a chair and melted into the background, even ordering a small glass of wine and gossiping with a few unicorns seated near her. Soon the sky grew clear and she trotted off, into the sunny day.

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Callilian



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PostSubject: Re: Sweet Treat   Tue May 21, 2013 10:15 am

(I'm no moderator, but your history and personality is quite brief. You also need to post in Submitted Creations, and not the subsections, or it confuses the mods. Thank you!)
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Fireseeker



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PostSubject: Re: Sweet Treat   Tue May 21, 2013 2:42 pm

We mods are very easily confused Calla ;)

Anyway, try to either add more details Sweet Treat's physical appearances, or add an image.

You should add more to the personality. Explain your OC's personality rather than list traits.

Lastly, give your OC a large history section. Perhaps explain her life as a filly and how she earned her cutie mark.

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PinkiePie101



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PostSubject: Re: Sweet Treat   Wed May 22, 2013 6:32 am

Derp. Sorry. Will move and edit.
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