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Kenpachi Ramasama



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PostSubject: Dark Cherry    Sat May 04, 2013 11:25 pm

Dark Cherry

Gender: Female
Species: Unicorn

Mane: Ruby

Tail: Ruby

Eyes: Green

Body: Midnight Blue

Cutie Mark: Three Cherries

Age (Baby,adult): Young Adult

Personality: She has a natural curiosity and likes to travel to new places and experience new things. But she tends to lean towards a calm nature most of the time, but in situations can get hyper and impulsive. If angered, which rarely happens, she will stay mad at the pony for awhile but gets a sense of guilt and forgives them easily.

Likes: New things, All Music, All Art, friendly ponies

Dislikes: Cupcakes, Bland things, bad fashion senses,

History: Her father is the owner and head of a large family that grows and tended cherry trees outside of Fillydelphia. She grew up in a rich household with one other sibling and had luxurious things. She of course got a Cherry for her cutie mark, and went to college for Agricultural Business, and Business based classes. During College Cherry got to meet alot of different ponies who made her want to go and see the world. Almost on impulse, she moved around after college before settling down in Ponyville.
Example RP segment: (Refer to post below)

The rain poured down around me, leaving the unpaved streets a mud pit to any ponies still walking. I cringe as each step left my coat more filthy than it was the step before. I give a frustrated sigh and look around for any escape from the downpour and spot a beacon of hope from a nearby tavern. I trot over to the entrance but stop as the sound of Country music spills out. I start to turn away from the Honky Tonk, but the beat of the music gets into my head and makes me want to tap my hoof in beat. With a defeated sigh, I trudge out of the mud and into the tavern where a live country band of earth ponies were playing out. A couple of ponies turn their heads and call out greetings or tip their hat, causing me to grin. I step over to the bar and take a seat where I'm facing the band, whom now had my full attention. The bartender walks over to me from behind the counter and gives a polite nod of his head.

B:"Howdy Miss, I hope y'all are enjoying the band tonight."

I grin and nod my head.

"It's wonderful! And everypony is really Friendly."

Acceptance


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Firework



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PostSubject: Re: Dark Cherry    Sun May 05, 2013 12:39 am

Your application is looking good! However, there are a few things that need tweaking. Your history could use a little more essence to it. Like where is the cherry farm located? (Although that's mostly because i'm curious ;D). Also, while your rp segment is good, it is not one of the 5 acceptable RPs. These templates are listed in the comments beneath the character creation template here: http://mlp-fim-oc-rp.forumotion.net/t2-pony-creation-template. This allows us to best judge your roleplaying ability and see your character in action.

On a side note, most ponies in the forum use the third-person perspective. However, first person is perfectly fine. Just giving you a heads-up :D
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Cherry    Sun May 05, 2013 6:20 pm

You will also need to reread the Character Creation Procedures section in the site rules, as there is something important you have missed out:
http://mlp-fim-oc-rp.forumotion.net/t1169-the-rules

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PostSubject: Re: Dark Cherry    Sat May 11, 2013 6:26 am

Changes have been made.

Your character has been approved.

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