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BlueMoon



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PostSubject: Blue Moon Earth Pony   Sat Apr 20, 2013 3:53 pm

Blue Moon

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Gender: Female

Species: Earth Pony

Mane: Black with Light Blue streaks

Tail: Same as Mane, Black with Light Blue streaks

Eyes: Blue

Body: Black

Cutie Mark: A Blue moon

Age (Baby,adult): Adult

Personality: Blue Moon is a pony with anger problems. She has a soft spot with animals, and if anyone says anything about her liking animals or her cutie mark. Let's just say get ready for a storm. Blue Moon isn't angry all the time, but if a Pony ticks her off she'll unleash her rage. She just walk off some where and just look to the sky and starts to sing. With a love of certain loud music. Singing always seemed to help her feel better.

Because of her anger, Blue Moon is often alone. This is one of the things that she dislikes the most. She remembers something from her past but every time she tries to remember, it escapes her.

Likes: Star gazing, Loud music(Depends on the music), singing, and Animals

Dislikes: Stupid Ponies, being alone, her Cutie Mark, and being angry at almost everything

History: Blue Moon grew up in the Slums of Manehattan. With her younger sister, she tried to keep themselves out of trouble. Without parents, they had to look out for themselves. Often being in bad situations, Blue started to develop anger issues with other Ponies. Other then her sister, Blue Moon was upset at almost anything. Now she always has a scowl on her face and rarely smiles anymore.

One night Blue Moon and her sister were wandering around the allies, soon found themselves surrounded by street thug Ponies. Telling her sister to get behind her, Blue was ready for a fight. Taking a trash can lid Blue threw it like she would a Frisbee, hitting the thugs. Shaking their heads, Blue ran past them. Glancing back she told her sister to run somewhere safe and to hide.

Blue Moon raced out of Manehattan, into a forest. One of the thugs gave chase and made her hit her head on a branch by ramming her into a tree. When Blue woke up she forgot about her younger sister.Blue Moon had a small Amnesia. She remembered parts of her life but not Pepper Gold, her own sister. She couldn't even remember how she got her Cutie Mark.

Example RP segment: (Refer to post below)

It is pouring rain outside. Your OC spots the light of a tavern up ahead. The tavern is filled with ponies that your OC doesn't know. Given your OC’s personality, compose a brief narrative in which your OC identifies and addresses the situation.

IC: Walking through the forest a young black mare had been traveling for who knows how long. Finally she saw a light through the heavy rain. Shaking her mane she walked in the tavern. She could feel the other ponies staring at her. Feeling her anger starting to rise she turned her head and glared at the nearest pony. A small foal, the foal was white with brown spots. "Hello. What's your name?" the Foal asked. As soon as it came the anger was gone. "My name's Blue Moon." the black mare replied.

[Place the correct specified word indicating that you have read the rules here] Acceptance


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PostSubject: Re: Blue Moon Earth Pony   Sat Apr 20, 2013 4:11 pm

Hello again! Your app is soooooooooo close to approval :D I would just like to see the personality come out a bit more. To be specific, how does your pony typically act towards other ponies? Angry all the time, or just aloof until they tick her off?

Also, you might want to check for grammar errors. I spotted quite a few throughout the application.

Besides that, it is looking very good :)
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PostSubject: Re: Blue Moon Earth Pony   Sat Apr 20, 2013 4:23 pm

Beautifully edited. You are approved! Have fun!
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