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Wish Dancer



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PostSubject: Brave Heart   Sat Mar 02, 2013 2:18 am

Brave Heart

Species: Earth Pony
Mane: Green, with darker green streaks. Curled.
Tail: Same as mane.
Eyes: Bright green
Body: Petite. Thin, but surprisingly strong limbs. Originally white pelt, but after spending her life in the slums of Manehattan it's turned a greyish color.
Cutie Mark: None
Age (Baby,adult): Filly
Personality: Brave Heart is very defensive, and at the slightest noise will get in a battle stance, even if she doesn't intend on fighting straight away. She doesn't like to expose her fears to others, deeming them weaknesses. Brave Heart is also very strategic, and while she isn't afraid to take another pony on, she prefers to see if she can trick them into not fighting her, her most common excuse being "Oh, hello father! How was your day working in the industrial district?" That usually sends ponies running. Because everyone knows the industrial district is very dangerous. While really a good pony, she has been toughened up by the slums.
Likes: Being alone, shelter, daylight, most animals, her name
Dislikes: The dark, spiders, dragons, storms
History:
Brave Heart was abandoned as a baby, wrapped in a brown blanket with the name 'Brave Heart' on a piece of paper pinned to it. As she grew she carried it around with her, wearing it somewhat like cloak. She finds her name admirable, and lives up to it. No matter how many times she's been in a fight (She's won about half of them) she still fearlessly faces anyone who challenges her. The tip of her left ear was torn off in a fight, and due to a birth defect her right eye has a slit for a pupil. While she will fight any pony, Brave has fears most young ponies do: The dark, spiders, thunder storms... But she doesn't let anyone see them. For a while she had strong bond with another slum foal who was a bit older than her, but he soon attracted the attention of a family, who took him in. And again, Brave was left alone. But she acted like she didn't care. And decided not to get close to someone ever again. She usually finds shelter under a dumpster on the same street every night.

Example RP segment:
Brave Heart kept her head down as she walked down the street, looking around through her curly bangs. Normally, she didn't get involved in anything that she didn't have to, but when she saw the colt bullying a filly much smaller than him she had to step in. When the colt noticed her approaching, he snapped "What are you looking at?" Brave narrowed her eyes and stepped in between him and the filly. "I'm looking at a sorry excuse for a colt who thinks it's okay to pick on someone half his size! What did the poor filly do to you?" The colt hesitated, caught off guard by her boldness. When he regained himself, he snarled "I don't have to answer your questions." Brave's face turned blank and she looked at something behind him. "Well, I recommend you hurry off before you have to answer to her dad. Boy, is he big." The colt's face turned to one of fear and he darted off without looking behind him. There wasn't another pony in sight. Brave gave the filly a nod and turned and trotted off.

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PostSubject: Re: Brave Heart   Sat Mar 02, 2013 12:25 pm

Welcome to the site :)

Your character is looking good, but a little bare. Try to flesh out the personality instead of listing words, and expand on her history.

A little more detail and your character will be ready for approval.

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PostSubject: Re: Brave Heart   Sat Mar 02, 2013 4:30 pm

Is that better?
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PostSubject: Re: Brave Heart   Sat Mar 02, 2013 4:36 pm

Eeyup.

Your character has been approved.

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